T1+Persuade

25/03/11 You have some great ideas here however you will need to see me about grammar and punctuation. We will delete this photo and copy and paste it from pages so we can edit it on your wiki as we discuss it. See me on Monday

LI: we are writing a letter to persuade that medical supplies down to Christchurch.

Medical Problems in Christchurch Send medical supplies down to Christchurch.

 People in Christchurch need medical attention now because earthquake, but there is not enough medical supplies and people are dying from this. So here are three reasons why they should send down more medical supplies to Christchurch to help those people who are in need of medical attention from the devastating earthquake that has accord.

 Millions of family’s in Christchurch are in desperate need of medical help, but there is not enough supplies for all of the family’s so the people that have been injured and that can’t get medical help. I think that we should send down lots of medical supplies to help people and save there lives.

 The hospitals are so full, because of that people can’t get in for medical treatments ,because buildings have fallen down and in the process injured many people they need to go in to a hospital so they need to send down the recuse helicopter to fly people out to hospitals or other places so they can get medical attention.

 There are not enough ambulances and the ambulances can’t get to people that are faraway and that don’t have any cars or transport to get to the medical tents so more ambulances should be sent to christchurch to help the those people in need of medical attention from the earthquake.

 So now I hope you can see why more medical supplies should be sent down to Christchurch to help those people in need of medical help and most of the ambulances have been crushed from the buildings so more ambulances should be sent down to Christchurch to to get people to the medical tents and the recuse helicopter should be sent down to fly people out of Christchurch to hospitals for the people that desperley need it.so if you were them how would you feel?

 Yours Sincerely Jack Harley  Room 29